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SIS Book 1 Chapter 60: Punishment and Thanks [First Draft]

 

"Lyle...so this is what all the fuss over the comm was about during the fight," Daz said as he looked at both Lyle and Dorian.

He was now in the bedroom that the two injured men had been brought to along with Sarah, Ger and a third person he had just officially met, Mave.

Lyle w...

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SIS Book 1 Chapter 59: Absolute and Depression [First Draft]

 Congratulations on completing day 3

Day 3 Stats

Enemies types:

Barbarian

Barbarian Chieftain

Number of Enemies Total:

501

Number of Enemies Slain By The ...

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SIS Book 1 Chapter 58: Crushed and Conclusion [First Draft]

 

Currently, Daz and Crusher were trying their best to kill as many of the regular Barbarians as they could while Rimmy was busy fighting Og, the Chieftain.

Over the past ten minutes, since Rimmy had started fighting Og, Daz and Crusher had killed or crippled a total of three-hundr...

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LTW Book 2 Chapter 71: Malt and Request [First Draft]

 

Lone pounced at the Wolfkin using roughly half of his strength to test the transformed man. While revelling in his power, Lone wasn't conceited enough to underestimate a C-Ranker since the last one he fought, Eko, had beaten him to a standstill.

'I'm definitely stronger than ...

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SIS Book 1 Chapter 57: Mave and Dream [First Draft]

 

Sandy soon returned to the room with a short woman. This woman looked to be roughly thirty-years-old. A long brown ponytail flowed down her back and her cute face was accompanied by a pair of metal-rimmed glasses. This woman was wearing a simple top and a pair of shorts that had obviou...

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SIS Book 1 Chapter 56: Towel and Smile [First Draft]

 

"Oh, Gaia! Prestami il tuo aiuto e cura la ferita di quest'uomo!" Sarah exclaimed in an unfamiliar language to both her and Dorian, though it sounded distinctly eastern in comparison to the continent ...

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SIS Book 1 Chapter 55: Wound and Vine [First Draft]

 

Surprisingly, the fight with the five Barbarians was far more manageable than when there were ten of them. While it made sense that it would be easier due to there being less of them, Lyle still felt like he would have been no match for one in a one-on-one match.

Sarah had bound one, ...

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SIS Book 1 Chapter 54: Fear and Danger [First Draft]

[AN: I don't have to proofread this one, so please forgive any errors you find.]


 

"A distraction would be helpful right now, Mr Richie!" Lyle shouted into his comm when he was mere feet away from the Barbarians. Naturally, although he was very confident in Daz's abilities, L...

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LTW Book 2 Chapter 70: Arrogance and Relief [First Draft]

 

'No mercy. Let's crush them as quickly as I can,' Lone thought coldly as he lowered his body and waited for the Wolfkin to make the first move.

Thankfully, he didn't have to wait for very long. With practised movements, the Wolfkin ran towards Lone in a graceful manner t...

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SIS Book 1 Chapter 53: Confidence and Cyanide [First Draft]

 

Going back twenty or so minutes, Daz and Crusher had just split off from Lyle and Dorian with Rimmy, leaving the two men to themselves. Dorian clearly started to shake at the sight of five-hundred muscular men, all of whom had bloodthirsty expressions and were holding actual weapons, unlike...

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SIS Book 1 Chapter 52: Illusion and Damage [First Draft]

 

Heather slung her ordinary looking fishing rod over her shoulder and took a very short second to focus her sight. 'I've never tried this before, so hopefully, I don't miss,' Heather said to herself.

"Increased Accuracy," Heather whispered. A yellow glow surroun...

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LTW Book 2 Chapter 69: Rings and Doubt [first Draft]

 

While Lone and the Wolfkin walked away from his group, Lone couldn't help but ask the leader, "So, where are we gonna fight exactly?" with hints of enmity in his voice.

"Hmm? New to the city of Gredia?" the Wolfkin replied rather amiably.

"Yeah," Lone said with suspicion in...

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Plot Hole Addressing for SIS

I noticed that I completely forgot about Dorian being with Daz's group to fight. I'll add him in when I edit further for the RRL posts. Sorry if you noticed this and I'll try to make sure that such a stupid mistake doesn't happen again.

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SIS Book 1 Chapter 51: Gravity and Tide [First Draft]

 

"The plan's simple. Ger, you still focus on supporting Lyle. Sarah do that same, and don't force yourself to kill anyone, they may be evil and trying to kill us, but these Barbarians are still Humans. Just try to focus on supporting us indirectly, mostly Lyle," Daz ordered over the earpiece...

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SIS Book 1 Chapter 50: Og and Denied [First Draft]

 Day three's attack shall now begin.

Due to the efficient use of your merit points, and by the request of several Gods, the difficulty of your attack has increased greatly.

The attack's difficulty has increased greatly due to the host's number o...

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SIS Book 1 Chapter 49: Crusher and Plan [First Draft]

 

Jorden looked straight into Daz's eyes with resolve, but when he saw how serious Daz's expression was, he faltered slightly.

"Well? Why did you volunteer?" Daz repeated himself. Even though the attack was going to happen in roughly ten minutes, Daz felt like he had to find out why Jor...

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SIS Book 1 Chapter 48: Trench and Volunteers [First Draft]

 

"Are you sure this is okay, Sandy?" Daz asked as he, Sandy, and another man who was roughly forty, looked at the Wasp Queen's body.

"Yeah, should be. Like I said, Bobby here," Sandy said as he pointed his thumb in the other man's direction, "has been a fish chef for about five years n...

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SIS Book 1 Chapter 47: Jorden and Harvesting [First Draft]

 

'What should I do in this situation? Try to calm him? I guess that's the right thing to do. Time to put my charisma stat to good use like I did with Lyle yesterday,' Daz thought as he stood up and approached the boy who was still clutching his knife tightly.

"Stab it," D...

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SIS Book 1 Chapter 46: Candle and Reality [First Draft]

 

"That was so weird," Daz said to himself in a quiet voice since the Richie twins had fallen asleep cuddled up to each other on the opposite side of the room to him.

He sat and thought over the dream, the Gravedigger, Cecil, the God of Shovels and the message from the system. "I h...

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SIS Book 1 Chapter 45: Pala and Gods [First Draft]

The God of Order has forcefully cut the connection to the God of Shovels' dreamscape. The God of Order is requesting the host, [Daz], to forget what just happened and to wait for further contact.

"What the hell?" Daz mumbled. 'You've gotta be kidding me...What the fuck ju...

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LTW Book 2 Chapter 68: Alcohol and Wolfkin [First Draft]

Lone and the girls went down to the Tavern's main hall and were met by Eolande on the way who had decided to leave her Glade. She was initially surprised to be inside of a building that wasn't one that Lone had created, but after a brief explanation, she soon accepted that they were in a f...

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SIS Book 1 Chapter 44: Graveyard and Cecil [First Draft]

 

Daz looked around and saw that he was now standing a very misty and nearly endless graveyard. "What the hell? I had only closed my eyes for a minute and...where the fuck is this?" Daz said as he looked around in a flurried panic of sorts.

He tried to run, but no matter how far his leg...

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LTW Book 2 Chapter 67: Brad and Craz [First Draft]

 

'Dear strange looking Fox person,

Thank you very much for the kind donation of all your gold. Our organisation will make sure to put your hard earned funds to good use furthering our goals. I happened to notice that you share similar qualities to us, so if the opportunity...

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SIS Book 1 Chapter 43: Tome and Stress [First Draft]

 

"Hmm..." Daz scratched his head in confusion as he stared at the table. He walked around it and looked at it very closely. The Reaper even knelt down to press his ear against the poorly constructed piece of metal furniture.

"Yup. I have no idea how I should enchant this," Daz conclude...

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LTW Book 2 Chapter 66: Malcolm and Card [First Draft]

 

"Hmm, that's weird," Lone said aloud by mistake. He was busy rifling around in his pockets as he followed the Deerkin waiter, so he accidentally slipped into his old habit of thinking out loud.

"Is there a problem, Mr Immortus?" the Deerkin asked with concern after he stopped wal...

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SIS Book 1 Chapter 42: Cube and Table [First Draft]

 

"Maybe now would be a good time for some montage music to play in the background?" Daz asked himself as he carefully screwed a leg into one corner of his attempt at a table. This new metal creation of his looked far more usable than his rain shelter thus far. "I wonder if it has anythi...

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LTW Book 2 Chapter 65: Group and Mugging [First Draft]

 

The first place that Pate took Lone's group after he and the scouting party had happily received their warm welcome home from their friends and family, was, in fact, a slightly larger looking door than the others which also led into the earth like the other ones. 

"Is this the ho...

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SIS Book 1 Chapter 41: Pride and Split [First Draft]

 

"Well...it's not the prettiest shelter I've ever looked at, and I definitely wouldn't buy it, but it's leagues above that shit from earlier. Good job, kiddo. You've successfully made a slightly less shittier rain shelter! Hahahaha!" Sandy said to Daz as he slapped the awestruck tw...

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LTW Book 2 Chapter 64: Pate and Fauna [First Draft]

 

'God, everyone is so tense...maybe I should just unsummon Soph? They seem to not mind non-humans like Swind, Breena and myself, but these Deerkin are so on edge around Soph,' Lone thought.

"Em, excuse me?" Lone said to the leader of the scouting or hunting group. The sam...

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SIS Book 1 Chapter 40: Failure and Levels [First Draft]

 

"Did I not introduce myself?" the man asked as he scratched the back of his head awkwardly. "Sorry, kiddo. The name's Alistair, but just call me Sandy," he said with a smile before he laughed lightly and hit Daz on the back with a light slap.

Daz didn't move an inch and just star...

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