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A Desire To Watch

Sequel to 'A Desire To Hear'

A Desire To Watch

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IMO, I enjoy the fact that Jordan is obese and unattractive. It makes the connection with Tracy more intense for both Tracy and Neil, the unattractive whale becoming the source of Tracy's sexual desires and Neils fantasy. And Jordan understanding his place and playing his role perfectly to everyone's delight.

Michael Haase

This is a great story with all the elements, beauty and the beast, cuckhold angst, a wife who embraces her husband's fantasy, embraces her role, wants to take control, understands the appeal of tease and denial for her husband, giving her Bull the attention denied to her husband, special cloths for Jordan, shaving for Jordan, keeping the door closed when she's dressing for Jordan, not letting Neil peek at her breast, denying himself the pleasure of viewing the original video that wasn't meant for his sight. Please continue !

Michael Haase

Nice start for much more to come. Please continue. I enjoy the Loving wife who recognizes her husband's fetish and is pulled into it to the point it is bow her fantasy too. Loving dialog and arousing humiliation are fun............:)

Michael Haase

Albeit always gets changed to I’ll it, just an observation spell and grammar check will never catch. Now as for the story WOW can you get any better than this? I think this story could take several different paths, maybe the video’s getting edited and sold with her becoming a porn star with hubby directing her and finding other ugly guys with big dicks and have a beauty and the beast series. Or maybe fatty takes her statement to heart and gets in shape and steals her away, because now he has looks to go along with that big cock she can’t live without.

FU

Very good and hot

John Lewis

Whats the next one? A desire to join? 🔥🔥🔥

John

I agree, i think this story doesnt need a follow up at all

Hadonosenju

Im a bit torn with this. Its hot, well written and a good introduction into sharing. Tracy is a little annoying. Her constant attitude towards Neal for this fantasy because she has guilt for wanting Jordan gets old. Her talks on not wanting to cheat, and have trust be a thing, while having two secret fucks with Jordan, while Neal is asleep and telling him he'll never be good enough are indications shes lost a good amount of respect. And Neal needs a diaper since he can't stop cumming in his pants.

Chris K


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