The Fiberglass Clown
Added 2024-03-24 18:34:20 +0000 UTCThe new video is out! I took your advice and added a bunch of scenes to the draft I shared earlier. It's about twice as long now and gives a lot more context. Let me know what you think.
-rat pacing around waiting for validation
Comments
Thank you so much, Weston! I feel good about it :)
Maya Ben David
2024-04-03 17:15:54 +0000 UTCThank you so much! I think the re-work tells a more coherent and emotional story as opposed to being purely strange. I had to do the biopsy bit, even though it was gross for me too!
Maya Ben David
2024-04-03 17:15:20 +0000 UTCThis was fantastic! Might be my favorite one so far, and the length was perfect.
Weston Wedding
2024-03-25 03:16:47 +0000 UTCI'm really enjoying what you did with this one with the rework! The extra stuff makes a huge difference. Generally feels more linked and self supporting. That baby teeth bit and the biopsy bit were nuts. Classic MBD. I'm here for it. :-) Her delight at the twins is so infectious.
Julian
2024-03-24 21:00:29 +0000 UTC
