Paola Chapter 1
Added 2020-03-22 20:37:58 +0000 UTCHey, everyone.
Here's the first chapter of the illustrated bonus story I worked on with Dantes. There are two version in English. One version is with speech bubbles inside the images, like a comic book. The other option is with clean images, without the speech bubbles. The text inside the bubbles is for the most part repeated sentences from the narrated text.
Paola Chapter 1 Illustrated English PDF
Paola Chapter 1 Illustrated English Clean Images PDF
Paola Capítulo 1 Ilustrada Español PDF
And here's a RenPy version of the chapter. It is the same format like the clean PDF, but I think it's easier to follow. For the next chapter I'll make a proper widescreen version, with individual image display and animations, but there's no time for that now.
Paola Chapter 1 RenPy English PC
Paola Chapter 1 RenPy English MAC
And here are the images, if you're not that much into reading:
Enjoy it, and let me know what you think.
Comments
Look very nice. This could be one day game like Jessica?
flOw
2024-03-27 16:59:14 +0000 UTCIt will be more than once a year, but the next chapters will take much less time to make. Thanks for the feedback, mate.
stoperArt
2020-03-23 13:11:32 +0000 UTCNot great, not terrible. PDF format is bad. Ren'Py is slightly better, but the huge amount of text over the pictures is not appealing, same goes for 2-3 renders in 1 picture - not good. Story is ok. But the quality of renders is awesome like always!!! Hopefully this will be once a year thing, because it takes too much time. I still love your work and will support you no matter what, this was just my 2 cents. Thanks, bye.
Karel Lopata
2020-03-23 10:55:50 +0000 UTCfixed
stoperArt
2020-03-23 07:28:26 +0000 UTCThe MAC link is the PC link
AndyInSunnyDB
2020-03-23 02:45:25 +0000 UTCDid some. It's not the same size screen as normal Ren'py.
Matt Gorman
2020-03-23 00:34:31 +0000 UTCDownloading...
Matt Gorman
2020-03-22 23:52:28 +0000 UTCI got into the groove and made it. Give it a try.
stoperArt
2020-03-22 23:07:16 +0000 UTCDoing it at the moment. I doubt I'll be ready before going to bed, it's a little slow process. I think it's easier to read though, compared to the PDF.
stoperArt
2020-03-22 22:22:37 +0000 UTCI'll wait for Ren'py.
Matt Gorman
2020-03-22 21:41:52 +0000 UTCYEAAAH!
OZ
2020-03-22 20:38:32 +0000 UTC
