Stuck (Comic)
Added 2023-09-21 20:11:05 +0000 UTCMan, if that's what they do to get her out of the door, I can't even imagine what they'll do to her in the juicing room..
Let me know what you think! I really want to focus on improving, both art and story-wise. Let me know if you enjoy this much text, or if you want less/more. Do you enjoy a somewhat cohesive story, or are you just in it for the drawings? Are there any parts of the art that you think I could improve? Are my blueberries too dark, too purple, not big enough, etc? Feel free to be as harsh as you want, I can (probably) take it!
Comments
Thanks for the reply! If you ever have any ideas for sequences you'd want to see, feel free to message me (same goes for anyone reading this)
Floatful
2023-09-25 13:44:32 +0000 UTCI definitely prefer your short sequences like this, rather than your individual drawings. Story wise, I'd say this is just the right amount of text too. Love to see a berry girl getting stuck
Debauched Sloth
2023-09-25 06:56:10 +0000 UTC
