Update on Janet Stanton and other format related topics

Hi folks,

I finalised the discussions with James from Amazonias on Janet. As you know this is a long standing collaboration with James as, since the very beginning, he wanted to have the exclusivity on Janet story for a couple of episodes. I delivered the #3 in April. This is the final part, meaning next stories of Janet will be back here for you guys :-)

The story is definitely "adult". It's not simply about showing porn, the story itself is designed for a mature audience. The interactions between Janet and Dave are not for the faint at heart. There are a lot of characters, but overall if you are familiar with the EOA world you'll recognise most of them. Going back to the story : it is deeply intricated in the EOA world and all across the story there are references to the EOA. Up to the point that, to be honest, someone not familiar with the universe might be a bit lost sometimes. Lastly but not least, it's  long and that's a topic I want to discuss with you.

When I say it's long I think it's about 330 to  350 pages. I don't know how James will manage this, if he will cut it into 2 pieces or more. The point is that if you look at most stories available in the scenes about amazons, or even story in general, they are often not that long. 80 pages is already a lot apparently. I've looked at how most of the guys doing something a bit similar are doing and the plot is often : an encounter + strenght demonstration, + sex.

I realise my stories are much longer and the plot is often not simple  or the pace is very slow (is that too Swiss ? lol)  or there are too many characters and I was wondering what you guys think of it. I'm working on The Heritage Hotel which is a cool story with many purpose  1) having fun, 2) showing how the EOA can practice business 3) show Karolina as an adult... and the story is much longer than I thought it would be. I was thinking I'd have finished the "finale" but I'm just on it, reason being as I wanted to show a very naughty scene on a beach.

I'm not looking to change the way I do story but I'd be curious to know your opinion on this.  As always you can either comment here or email me at pmontrose35@gmail.com

Thanks